A storyboard that I am working on and trying out in Toon Boom Storyboard (All characters/designs are property of Autodesk)

Here I am playing with color again. Should I add anything? Am I missing anything? Coloring can be a bit challenging!

This is my first time having to submit a retraction. But I am glad I was called on it and we only become better artist by recognizing and owning up to our mistakes. This is of course still a work in progress.